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I chuckle at the idea of WCW seeing revising his draft of ~400 words down to like 20.

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That also made me laugh. Thank you for understanding my vision, Pace.

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Ha! Brilliant, and so clever! Love the bit about starting to rain. You did a nice job of not just entirely satirizing, but also riffing / expanding. Thank you!

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Chickens? Maybe mention chickens! Ha! I love this poem and your take on it.

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Haha thanks Leslie!! ❤️❤️

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